This is why I love animation. Because we have awesome animators like you. This should get an academy award for animated short. (It's too bad Wisney and Creamworks take all of the nominations from stupid narcissistic snobs. ) The story is well thought out from beginning to end. The animation was flawless. The line-art was pencilly, but your stylistic choices make the sketchy bright character animations a great choice in contrast to the the very handsomely textured background. Your animation was simply eyegasmic to look at. Keep making great stylistic and analytical choices, and no one will be able to stop you.